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這2篇是由我們的小粉絲參加活動所提供的文章，今天就來讓大家參考實際英文編修完成之後的成果。

*本活動已經獲得文件作者同意，刪除個人資訊後公開部分內容作為行銷用途。轉載內文請註明出處，Wordvice保有中止或修改本活動之所有權利。

第一份文件:由編輯Kypros修改

Comment:
This personal statement is well-written, readable, and positively portrays you. I edited your work for grammar and punctuation, to smooth out flow, fix awkward phrasing, improve tone, and chose alternate words and phrases for clarity and persuasiveness. I’ve also asked questions and comments where your further input could improve this even more.

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第二份文件:由編輯Josh修改

Comment: 

Thanks so much for letting me help you with this statement of purpose.
Overall, you’ve presented yourself very well; however, your essay can use some specificity. By this, I mean that you should stick with one topic and really explain it in detail. This can be a research project – and be sure to focus on your results and analyses, rather than just the topic – or a related story, but the admissions committee is looking for specific experience, skills, and personality traits that match with their faculty and students. Thus, you need to explain in detail what you’ve done, what you’ve learned, and what you can contribute to their program.

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